6/30 p7
another shitty day
sound of the cats (The Voyeur - in the labyrinth — count pages —
images from Robbe-Grillet — how long will it take to get 360 — an underground passage with — pages at this rate — smooth walls
(is it necessary to read Robbe-Grillet)
<for me or for the reader — i don’t know what i meant — note the different arrangements here which should be returned to a two page format — (my question is answered on the next page) (but where do the parentheses belong)>
to understand this book
<self exegesis>
(a line from Jefferson Airplane comes to mind)
<which line>
how can all these associations be tied together
should they
should there be parentheses or brackets around these lines
the spacing is wrong (too tight) this should be a column space
spatialization
floating paragraphs — (not paragraphs — get rid of sentences and paragraphs) the way phrases break off — questions become statements or different questions
ambiguities
multiple meanings
floating signifiers
ideas for an appendix of rejected forms and structures
ideas for alternative structures
<the changing layouts emphasize the arbitrariness of the layouts>
use of computer etc — interactive reading — the reader could make his/her own structure by moving words and paragraphs around
< <it's hard to get away from thinking in terms of paragraphs — the difficulty of finding new words to convey new ideas — i was trying to think of one today but i forgot what i was thinking about>
the use of lines etc to connect the word ‘floating’ on the true page etc
graphs
graphos