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structure — keep the main sequence in one type — then use inserted text to indicate additions — or some structure for aside
(some notes are asides to the text and comment on it or form instructions etc some notes were written as part of the text)
for these notes — other comments etc on the side — right page — anywhere there’s room — the notes etc go there — what about variations on the paragraph — to the right or at the end
at the end a list of dates and what type the note was

a thought over and over again that I can’t get written right — but isn’t that what writing is all about — getting it down (is it thought) — the thought — whatever — that this is not what I want to write — but I have to write it — to prove that I can’t or that I can

it won’t matter
it won’t end