6/15
2:25 AM
looked at manuscript of “Wasteland” and The Genesis of Ezra Pound’s Cantos
textural elaboration — pages from the wasteland book are interesting in comparison with my pages with notes
although I don’t cross out much — I didn’t think of them while doing those pages —
the development of the outlined words is totally different — ideas for cantos — Plattsburgh cantos
past cantos — memories
tranquility recollected with emotion — emotion in tranquility
the nightingale’s song I have never heard — web of allusions
all explained (question)?
vague recollection of the call of the whippoorwill — past cantos — my grandfather’s farm —
Swanton Vt. — swans in the town square — Highgate Springs — nice names — sound of insects —
displacement in a strange room — the summer sun — memories — 30 years ago — was I so young —
the summer sound of the nighthawks — not yet displacement in time — 27 years ago —
a family reunion tonight — 27 in fancy stained glass — Valcour Lodge — temporal displacement —
a girl who looked like one I knew 15 years ago — perhaps a young sister but I didn’t ask —
I never do — does it matter — grey eyes — an upward mouth that I love
the wine is old
Prince Noir reflect back
death
reflect back
life years ago
black prince
prints picture of
floating images Valcour Lodge
the murmur of voices — without words
drone of
sounds — cars — the insects are not buzzing yeta large number of grasshoppers and leafhoppers in the yard today —
blue and white blanket on green lawn — feel of the sun — now and then
there is a well of memories — overlays of sunny days
epiphany girls — H in Canton — unknown in Orlando
(Canton — China — or land — land of gold)
Bush The Genesis of Ezra Pound’s Cantos pp15-16 entelechy
the problem of trying to {make / give} an overall structure to a work that is actually a process — a closure
a general problem with my work — I want to give it an overall form
mathematical - musical - geometrical — whatever
but there is no way because I view it as an open process rather than a closed structure
a long poem - novel — whatever
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